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#beauty --




What pushes me to
want more, and
it keeps repeating
everytime you reappear

the darker flowers you
brought along, still
manage to enbrighten
my faded nightskies

the part of you I
recognize, in
every single lightsource
this candle seems warmer tonight

the receptacle for
my rivers, flowing
ink I left for you

such beauty you cannot hide.
©2003-2009 ~zaknafein
:iconzaknafein:

Author's Comments

First poem written in ages...
After a phone conversation...
With the one I love...
Heart

It IS a bit abstract, but I like it. Written at 3AM, you see... ;) (Wink)

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:iconobsidianblade:
3 am poems are my favourites...
Quite rich - all such I want to boil in.
And I am sorry for having nothing strong to say.
This is honest. Who am I to criticize your feelings?

--
Spirits enforce, art enchants.

Comment, to get comments.
Share your kindness, not your hate.
Love the art, before yourself.

In art honesty is not only the best but the only policy.
:iconmaiden13:
very nice...i like the abstract feelings. good job.

--
"and the moons and stars danced to the erie sound of her whispering voice as the chimes called out the final hour...."


~* Maiden *~
:iconsonnentau:
very abstract.. but nontheless beautiful.... very well put words....

argh.. all that sounds so cold.. so... unpersonal.... but.. you know what i think about you and your poetry... and it surely feels good to read some again here in DA...

Blush still can't believe the luck that led me to your site.... or vice-versa.....

we'll see, how things will turn out in the future....

Heart yf.. still

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:bulletblue: poetry & prose: ~sonnentau :bookdiva:
:bulletblue: photography: ~cataya :camera:
:bulletblue: member of: ~dark-writing :jsenn:
:bulletblue: addicted to: *zaknafein :aww:
:iconsexievampiregirl:
"the darker flowers you
brought along, still
manage to enbrighten
my faded nightskies"

Maybe I'm interpreting it wrong but it sounds to me like the person who makes you happy isn't very happy...

Anyway though, I love it! Very nice writing =) (Smile)
:iconphoenixreal:
Interesting placement of punctuation. I think its very well done though, wonderful work.

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:blackrose:blessed be~*~phoenixreal:blackrose:

Without the darkness, there can be no light. Without the light, there can be no dark. Between, there casts the shadow. I am that shadow.

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